By B (9 years old)

Once in a mystical land called Fantasia there was a dog called Comando. He wasn't a normal dog, he was a giant dog and magic too. He found a princess mirror so he looked on the back of it and it said "You need two golden berries to go through this mirror to the human world."  The only place you can get berries is in the Dark Forest. So the dog decided to go to the Dark Forest. He saw a hob goblin on the way and Comando said "I'm going to the Dark Forest". As he started walking he heard something at the back of him, it was the hob goblin.

  The hob goblin said "It's pretty dangerous in the Dark Forest" but Comando thought he would be all right. It started to get dark so Comando found an old gold mine. Suddenly the hob goblin came running down the mine and said "Didn't you read the sign? If you go in the mine you will be haunted for life!" The hob goblin and Commando went down the wrong tunnel and they were trapped in the middle of twenty tunnels. The hob goblin raced down a tunnel and thought that it would lead to outside but there was only a mine train. The hob goblin hopped in the mine train and it started to move. It went around five sharp corners, two loop-the-loops and shot out into Mermaids' Creek.

 Meanwhile, Comando was trying to get out. So he went through the tunnel that said "Danger." He found a crack in the rock and he saw the Dark Forest . He banged the rock and made a hole big enough for him to fit through. The hob goblin was still trying to find Comando. He went down the yellow brick road. He knew that the golden berries were in the middle of the dark forest. So off he went. On the other side of the Dark Forest, Comando ran in to some trouble. He found the silver monkey gang. Comando used his powers to make them go to another dimension. The silver monkey gang had said before they left " It looks like the silver monkey gang is blasting off again." Comando came to the middle of the dark forest, he got four golden berries and went back to his house. He went straight back through the mirror and went straight to sleep.